Very nicely presented piece Tovah. Flows extremely well. Can I suggest that any evidence provided is followed through with an embedded link so that other writers can simply click on the words or names, and it will take them directly to that evidence? If you aren't sure how, I will guide you through the process.

Send me your email address, and I will happily show you the pub submission process as per my chat with Kathy last night. TIA Jonathan.